The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The two pie charts illustrate how many people visited Ashdown Museum and the percentage of satisfaction before and after museum refurbishment.
Overall, there is an increase in the number of visitors visiting the museum. In addition, there are more people expressed satisfaction of their visits, while the dissatisfaction rate decreased after the refurbishment. The numbers of no response survey remained the constant.
Regarding the visitors who took the surveys and felt satisfaction after the museum refurbishment, the numbers of people who were very satisfied and satisfied increased significantly from 45 people to 75 people.
The numbers of dissatisfied visitors dropped rapidly from 40 people before the refurbishment from only 15 people after the refurbishment. Likewise, there is a decrease in the number of people who expressed very dissatisfied from 10 people to 5 people. Furthermore, the numbers of visitors did not express their opinions kept the same at 5 people.
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- The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. 61
- The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. 67
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. 67
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, likewise, regarding, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25319671844 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.752094923 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226911549625 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118334493695 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645941691748 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163824643091 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348011347257 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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