It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
There are different stages in any person’s life normally. Building your own house is one of the determining decisions which you should make, because your future is depended on where your house would be constructed. Some people prefer to have a cozy house in suburbs and countryside. However, some other families believe that their house must definitely be in big metropolises and developed cities. I think having a place in bigger cities can benefit families more in this era due to series of reasons.
First, when a person grows up enough to work, he must try to find a decent job for himself and become independent. So, finding an appropriate occupation would be much easier in big cities than any local town or village, since there are more developed industries and companies with working opportunities in developed areas. For example, my uncle Jerry was the first engineer in his family and his whole family and relatives were farmers in countryside villages. So, if he decided to stay in his hometown he had no choice other than becoming a farmer eventually. But, he told his parents that he wanted to have an engineering career. In order to achieve his goal he immigrated to a bigger place and he found a well-paid engineering job.
Secondly, any parents must try to provide the best things for their children. Children’s future is a crucial matter that can affect any parents’ decision about where they should live. Big cities will give a better level of education in schools. Children would know more about different subjects which they may never experience, if they have lived in little towns.
Last but not least, bigger places have a direct impact in young individuals socialization. In large areas young adults can meet more different people with many beliefs. This can lead to a better understanding of your environment accordingly. Also, these people can handle group assignments more effectively than the people who were grown in much isolated places.
In conclusion, deciding where to establish your house can be a tricky decision. You can live in countryside or buy an apartment in large mega cities. Each of them have their own benefits. But you should consider every aspect before choosing between them finally.
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- TOEFL T P O 23 - Integrated Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s were farmers in countryside villages. So, if he decided to stay in his hometown he h...
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Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...er places have a direct impact in young individuals socialization. In large areas young adu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05361930295 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78735035403 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584450402145 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1432771609 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9565217391 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2173913043 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26086956522 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147711740185 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392472233722 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358687010141 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753061559711 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162351784279 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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