protection of environment
We all live in the same environment which is the one and only supplier of our basic survival needs such as water and air. While some people argue that only the authorities of the governments and large industries can boost the environmental situations, some others would say that individuals can be influential as well.
Some people assert that these are the governments which have to protect the environment against the existing dangers thanks to the fact that governments are more equipped and authorized to take some steps. The supporters of this viewpoint also believe that large companies are as responsible as the governments for improvement of the environment since they would be deemed to impose a vast majority of air and water pollution to the nature through their activities. As a prime example, Zobahan factory, in Esfahan appears to be the main source of air and water contamination in this city in a few recent years. Therefore, the proponents of this view state that large industrial centers can enhance the environment by reforming their activities and reducing incorporation of harmful materials in the environment.
The opponents of this view argue that not only the governments and great companies can make a change and optimize the natural environment, but also every single individual should be responsible for it since their lives are closely in contact with it. for instance, people can consume less water in their day to day lives, or they can produce less rubbish to enhance the healthy situation of the environment.
To sum up, it appears to me that governments and large companies along with the people are able to ameliorate the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are able to ameliorate the environment.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08727272727 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92268188852 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7713173927 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.444444444 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5555555556 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123992098972 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054010833113 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687155976079 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638098489777 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786738938738 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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