It is widely seen that globalisation is becoming widespread all over the world day by day. The demerits of this preponderate its merits. The reasons arising from this will be disscussed in the following essay.
With the increase of globalisation some benefits can be gained interms of economy, communication. To begin with, business sector becomes international. Individuals can reach whatever they want easily. Owing to this, companies in the various regions tend to be more productive and competitive. Therefore, in order to keep up with competition arising from this matter, business sector produce high quality products. In addition to this, companies focus on establishing their factories in the developing countries on account of the low labour. Thus, they may provide more cash Money and can allocate funds to less developed countries. Furthermore, the job opportunities increase in that countries. Moreover, thanks to the technology, the Internet becomes an indispensable part of our lives. People in different regions of the earth keep in tounch one another. Golobal World makes communication more convenient that the past.
However, the demerits of globalisation should not be ignored. Firstly, it shifts employment opportunities from developed countries to countries which suffer from poverty. Because of this, the rate of unemployment in whealthy countries goes up dramatically. To exemplify, today while unemployment rate is increasing in the US, it is declining in China which has the low work force. Another drawback behind this is that epidemic diseases. Although improvements in transportation system is a perfect step, this matter leads to spreading transmitted health diseases such as bird flue. Finally, thank to the fact that global trade creative more pollution and waste, individuals are prone to purchasing more products without a real need. According to recent researc in Turkey, the amount of pollution regarding technological tools which are not used approximately ten time has rosen compared to that of pollution in 1999.
To conclude, although there are some advantages of global World interms of economy and communication, dire consequences of this overweigh its benefits. I personally believe that should governments take some measurements regarding harmful resetls, they can overcome detrimental effects of globalisation easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65730337079 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18333167538 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601123595506 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2897397049 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9166666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134641304131 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336780420248 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395993337895 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820136006086 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102860702928 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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