It is important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends
Friend in need is a friend indeed" which is one of the old proverb I hear from my childhood on wards. As equal to our parents we have attachment to our friends. In my view it is very important to stay our old friends than making new. The base of my view are personal, social and philosophical.
Personally, our known friends are always trustworthy. We know them very well, in our need times they helped us in a whole hearted way .For instance, my best friend is from my village and he knows ever thing about me and there is no barrier with us. Even my hard times he is always with me and the trust developed between me and him is unspeakable. This type of trust we can not create in one day so this friendships cannot be destroyed while getting a new one.
Spending with more time with old friends makes people more happy and socially active. With our old friends it is always happy to move around and this will provide lot of stress relief for both parties. For example, when I am in stress , usually I will call my friend and speak for a while then he will give some advice that gives more energy. This type of freedom we can not get in new friends. Therefore keeping old friends helps to get more creative.
Philosophically, people want to mingle with there old friends because of the known relationships. For example, I have lot of new friends in my office but, if I have any personal issues it will be hard to speak to them because of my mental block. They may understand me but I still have a doubt in it. As a result the old friends gives us more confidence in dealing with our issues.
In conclusion, it is hard to get an ideal friend it is always better to keep our old friends that will give more confidence and always we will get a we feeling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32432432432 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46402638181 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483483483483 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.001693732 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33256552513 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128261054372 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121388741536 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212777149032 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079039051217 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.