Many museum charge for admission while other are free.
Do you think advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
It is undeniable that museums are ubiquitous and accumulate most of the ancient material related to history.Certain museums charge for entrance whereas other are free of cost.I think it is advantageous to take a little amount of money from public to enter a museum.
There are manifold points why i am holding this view.First and foremost,management could easily restrain any menace as sometimes due to hustle and bustle some items may have damages and to repair that managers may use the money they charge as a entry fee thus the entry fee is lucrative.Moreover,it may give immense benefits to museum for expansion because for preserving and adding more historical items much land is needed.consequently ,by using that amount museums could be extended and may become opulent.
On the other hand,i merely found a particular disadvantage of charging and that is all about ignorance because people may not prefer to visit museum as they do not want to pay enough money.To illustrate,school going children cannot afford to pay the money for entrance so they may not even think to have a visit in museum.
To conclude,it is true that advantages outweigh disadvantages but the particular disadvantage could be alleviated by charging little amount of money rather than large.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, so, thus, whereas, i think, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17874396135 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28661513051 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6038647343 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.68861215 49.4020404114 252% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 268.0 106.682146367 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.75 20.7667163134 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.5 7.06120827912 361% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316829940868 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201369229812 0.084324248473 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754105176036 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201369229812 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754105176036 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.8 13.0946893788 220% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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