Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
People ought to pay an entrance fee at some museums, whilst they are allowed to enter for free at other museums. Even if travelers prefer not to spend their money on admissions, I insist that museums should charge for some reasons. This essay will discuss why people should pay fees at museums and will explore some examples related to this situation.
Firstly, no one can doubt that it takes a huge amount of money to maintain museums. Given this situation, it is clear that museums need a source of income by selling entrance tickets, even if the major role of museums is not making money. For instance, one of the free museums in South Korea recently shut down since they were underfunded, which could have not happened if they charged a little amount of money to people.
Secondly, if museums are free, it will be dotted with homelessness, who are eager to find warm places, clean washrooms, and purified water, who can make trouble with tourists. For example, the Art Gallery of Busan in South Korea used to open to everyone for free, but it had negatively impacted people who wanted to enjoy their leisure time at the gallery as they were distracted by screaming homeless people. In order to keep museums and galleries safe and clean, it is required to charge some amount of money.
It is often argued that the museum should be free since it plays a major cultural role, and it is sometimes said that cultural institutions have to give chance to everyone regardless of their wealth. However, this essay reaffirms that museums should charge for admission for the sake of themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80797101449 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4082704023 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1744804478 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.636363636 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299376359174 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123019894989 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887686959476 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189671715405 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382365298343 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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