People are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life. What do you think about?
In recent years, there has been colossal upsurge in the ongoing trend of people migrating between the countries for better prospects of the life, be it an impoverished or affluent nation. Some people believe that switching between countries is always a positive outcome, while few argue stay that it is outdo be in same country for better facets for their own country. In this essay, I will elaborate both the important aspects of life.
At the outset, there are myriad of benefits, firstly, people migrating to countries for better future scopes. For example, in some countries, students find themselves lack of further studies and due to poor facilities, they lack to achieve further education & they keen to commence with further studies for future growth and good jobs. Hence it is needless to say that switching country to country for future growth is always powerful tool.
Moreover, another pivotal facet of the argument is that moving to other countries will thrive to decline the development of their own country. For instance, as most of the people after their self-stability and better jobs they ignore to back to their countries and thus resulting the fact of their own country is devastating stage in such criminal activities. One should look after and return back for development their own country with latest technologies that have the positive impact of their country.
To recapitulate from the arguments aforementioned, one can conclude that despite of having advantages of moving to the cities, but the upsides that can look for limiting the migration the purpose to other countries is also apropos option and are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outdone'.
Suggestion: outdone
...utcome, while few argue stay that it is outdo be in same country for better facets fo...
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Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...tudies for future growth and good jobs. Hence it is needless to say that switching co...
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Line 5, column 387, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...l activities. One should look after and return back for development their own country with ...
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Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
... back for development their own country with latest technologies that have the positive imp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13970588235 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65036983782 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0034165694 50.4703680194 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.8 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.9669160288 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142236508299 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662972159732 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349467199904 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914126277608 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334021508061 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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