The bar graphs depict the difference in exercising pattern between the sexes.
On the whole, men seem to work out the most in their younger days and are indulging is less of this when the touch middle age.
To begin with, around 53 percent men below the age of 24 years work out, but the same percentage of women tend to perform physical activities when they touch their mid fifties. This could indicate that more women tend to become more health conscious when they are older. Yet, we cannot be so sure, as between the ages of 25 to 54 years it has always been the females who exercised more often. This is evidenced by the fact that around 49 to 53 percent of the fairer sex tended to indulge in planned activities for most part of their lives.
The unique part about this is, the boys tend to be more active, but younger and older men overlooked health. Either they were couch potatoes or too negligent. This is highlighted by the fact that between the mid twenties to mid sixties the guys were always beaten by active girls. Of course, once old age steps in the trend is equalised with about equal number of old people working out or performing tasks.
Here again, women tend to take the lead, but only by a margin.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, of course, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47555555556 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13769923626 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591111111111 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.433326984 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5454545455 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160214294871 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573595852179 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530357846294 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819882355825 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403109027589 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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