Many old buildings are protected by law are part of a nation history.Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones.
How important is to maintain old buildings.
Should history stand in the way of progress.
In this modern era,Everything is customised in a new way such as cars,clothes,buildings.Due to this,some people reckon that old buildings.However,plenty of buildings have a historical significance,so they are protected under law. From my perspective,it is crucial to secure these infrastructures not only because some of has historical background but also they have more pros too,but this does not mean progress should stop.
One argument to put forward is that, these old constructions provide an insight into history. Moreover, they showed,How people used to live many centuries ago? For instance,Mohenj Daro and Harappa are the two biggest cities of Indus Valley which illustrates the livelihood of ancient Egypt and many more interesting facts about our past. this is a boon for school-goers to understand the history of world by visiting these type of archaeological places.Additionally these kinds of constructions increases the tourism.By and large,these helps in enhancing the economy of the country.
On the other hand,it is argued that, will these buildings prevent the development, if they preserve? Generally speaking,No these buildings do not hinder the progress. What this means is, these archaeological sites are being used for modern purposes, whilst, maintaining their authenticity. Ipso facto,they will become an interesting and new way of learning.A good illustration for this is,directors of mythological and historical movies utilised these types of sites for depicting more originality in their content.Apart from it,learning history from books is a very boring medium to introduce students about our past.
it is conspicuous, from the points stated above that ,it will be more beneficial for society ,whether they preserved ,renovated and protected.I believe that, these old constructions teaches the plethora of things to the Homo sapiens which helped in making bright future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, apart from, for instance, such as, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70422535211 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68451215704 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62323943662 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.1216921785 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.272727273 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196345146075 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759118038275 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056226012481 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116727612259 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565674864712 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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