Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies.
Nowadays, the number of organization that offer the medical service is increasing considerably which cause a competitive market. An argument that is often asserted is that those profit-making company should be banned from offering medical service due to the fact of importance of this issue. I completely agree with this idea because of a couple of reasons.
First of all, it should be stuck in the mind that medical service is contributed to the health situation of a society. In fact, a medical care system play a key role in public welfare and can influence the lifelong of people considerably. Besides, a high-standard medical care system that provide people with developed medicines and modern equipment, can reduced the public cost that resulted from medical treatments. It refers to hospital expenses such as the price of medicines, surgeries or some special treatment for special disease like cancers.
On the other hand, there are several profit-making company who became the leader in medical market that offer some substandard services. They do not care about the quality of service and the following consequences. Most of them use low quality materials and there is not adequate supervision on the production process. The most important issue is to reduce the costs of the production to increase the amount of profit. Because of that, the government must set some strict laws to control their performance which brings a new set of concerns with it.
Taking everything into consideration, there is no doubt that medical service is one of the most essential features of public welfare that can influence the economic condition of each country in long term. As a result, those organization that are responsible for providing medical services should implement their commitment correctly regardless their profit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this organization' or 'those organizations'?
Suggestion: this organization; those organizations
...each country in long term. As a result, those organization that are responsible for providing medi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29209621993 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90258622442 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1547834643 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259406060303 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834228333799 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677909137545 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151325743804 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270356468336 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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