A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:- Tell your

Dear John,

I hope this letter of mine find you and your family in ravishing health. The purpose of writing this letter is to provide you with information about a job opening in India which could be perfect for you, that you asked in your last letter.

I got the profile information from an Indian online job portal "Naukri.com". It is an opening for the "DevOps Software Engineer" in Accenture, it is a local company. You need to be involved in the automation part for continuous integration and delivery for the project. I think this opportunity is suitable for you, as you are already up to date and indulged with job-related skills like Ansible, Jenkins, AWS, and Python. You can directly apply for this job on the website with your updated resume, the job ID is "CA12345". It may be a possibility that the organization would ask you for face to face round, for that you are always welcome in India do not worry about anything.

Write me back about your plan regarding this particular opportunity or in case you need further assistance.

Your Faithfully,
ABC

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, regarding, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95161290323 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23877768425 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9951247029 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.495473807637 0.216113520407 229% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204983290884 0.0766984524023 267% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117192738297 0.0603063233224 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.350224068236 0.12726935374 275% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125365917406 0.0580467560999 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.