Internet has problems
Nowadays, we can't imagine our lives without the existence of internet. I assume that it is quite straightforward that the internet has a significant influence on our daily lives, and some people may consider this impact as a positive, conversely, the other people may find it as a tragic concept.To my mind, the internet has tremendous amounts of advantageous aspects, and this concept eliminates its potential drawbacks.
Firstly, by utilizing internet correctly, we can get abundant amount of knowledge, and some precious information which was ambigious to us. To be more precise, it is obvious that with the help of the internet we can develop ourselves as a highly intellectual individuals. Indeed, by obtaining tremendous amounts of information from internet, we can enlarge our outlook, and think in an abstract way. Consequently, we can improve our creativity simultaneously.
Secondly, as we all know, the internet provides us with the variety of entertaining sources. Moreover, we can be engaged with these entertainment sources, and improve our contemporary mood. I assume that the most effective way of overcoming exhaustion is utilizing internet. From general perspective, internet can provide you with specific websites which serve as an entertaining source. However, if we use it excessively, then it could have some potential drawbacks.
Thirdly, I consider that the internet is students' best friend. To be more precise, students from all around the world utilize internet for their daily studies, and this concept is very beneficial for them. Because, contemporary educational system requires students to obtain information from specific sources. And with the help of the internet, students comprehend, and gather the information more effectively. As we all know, time is the most precious concept which we have in our lives. Thus, we need to be careful while spending it. Moreover, if we start to waste it, we could face some detrimental events in life.
In conclusion, I assume that the internet has enormous amounts of advantages, and this concept makes it much more superior than other conventional information sources. Consequently, it has significant amount of benefits to mankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
Nowadays, we cant imagine our lives without the existence...
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Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
... people may find it as a tragic concept.To my mind, the internet has tremendous am...
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Line 2, column 381, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an abstract way" with adverb for "abstract"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
..., we can enlarge our outlook, and think in an abstract way. Consequently, we can improve our creat...
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Line 4, column 208, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is concept is very beneficial for them. Because, contemporary educational system requir...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[2]
Message: The adjective more is normally used with to and does not need 'more' (so called implicit comparative). Probably you need to write: 'superior to'.
Suggestion: superior to
...antages, and this concept makes it much more superior than other conventional information sources....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41860465116 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15778502651 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505813953488 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.4326414396 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189403861341 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738352627619 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631182912546 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125547648533 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264023680141 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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