The video camerw provides an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life so it has become important form of documentation than written ones. I strongly agree with the speaker. Today, in this world of technologies, this has made easy for all of the people to keep the records of every special event that happens in their life. Here are some example that aptly illustrates video as an important form of documentation.
Firstly, lets talk about what really video includes. Video is that form of documentation that capture every events happening along with the real characters,expressions, situations and their time of happening. Almost every events can be captured in video form. This has made people easier to recollect their memories in those forms and make easier to preview it in the future whenever they want unless they erase it. If it were to record in written form then it would fill up many copies of books. The videos doesn`t need such voluminious books to record them. It can just be stored in chips form.
Secondly, in this world of advancement, videos aren`t just videos for creating the memories and recording the documentations. They have become a tool for source of income to the people too. Many people are involved in such field as their profession and living their lives. They can also play important role in justifying someones guilt as well as in exonerating the innocent ones. Video are used in various forms depending upon the need and necessity of the people. For the security in banks,buildings,stores etc, camera`s are fitted for the video record so that anything unusual happens, they can analyse the case looking at the records. This has made people`s life easier than before. Although we see many benefits from the video records, there are some demerits too. People might use this form inorder to defame or accuse person which might lead to the misuse of the form. As there can be both pros and cons of everthing, we must be careful regarding such things.
However, video documentation cannot be best form in every cases. People`s emotions and their insidious feeling can`t be captured in the video. Their genuine record can be felt in the written form where people can imagine their movements in every words they they go through while going through them . Such effects can`t be felt in the video records.
In sum, no matter how much better form you try to introduce in everything, there always remains something behind. Nothing in this world is perfect. Likewise,although we can see video provides an accurate and concincing records, there are some thing which are left behind that the video can`t include. However, this has been a important form of documentation than written records in today`s world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: all the
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...happening along with the real characters,expressions, situations and their time of happening...
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...fill up many copies of books. The videos doesn't need such voluminious books...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, look, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2337.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09150326797 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91704705414 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501089324619 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 719.1 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0643864099 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5862068966 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8275862069 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1724137931 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400249454099 0.243740707755 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113271855037 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121609949188 0.0758088955206 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258341651882 0.150359130593 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909667359003 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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