diet
The pie chart compares the percentage of 3 nutrients: carbonhydrates, protein and fat in 3 diets: average diet, healthy diet, healthy diet for sport.
It is clear that, in all of diets, proportion of carbonhydrates was highest in 3 nutrients. On the other hand, fat accupied the lowest proportion of nutrient in 3 diets: average diet, healthy diet, healthy diet for sport.
In the both of average diet and healthy diet, fat account 20%, while people who has healthy diet for sport consume a lower relative amount of fat, at 15%. People who eat lowest amount of protein, at 25% has healthy diet for sport, lower than those who eat a healthy diet 5% and average diet 15%
Beside, the people who has healthy diet for sport eat highest the amount of carbohydrates, make up 60% of the diet. This is 20% higher than the proportion of carbohydrates in a average diet and 10% more than the precentage of carbohydrates in a healthy diet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74390243902 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73804252323 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451219512195 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4349643293 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.666666667 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.532178884606 0.215688989381 247% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.351595301461 0.103423049105 340% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165233292633 0.0843802449381 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.433529908911 0.15604864568 278% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036100647664 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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