Television dominates the free-time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The world is now a global village and socialization has evolved from physical contact to virtual communications. Arguably, television maybe assumed to raise the level of laziness and interaction among the people. I do not agree with this assertion because television encourages learning and helps in relaxing.
Information is power and television promotes knowing happening around the world. different programs are been aired on the television ranging from news, movies, sports, religious activities and so on. this programs are targeted towards different segment of the society. For example, it is generally known that men loves watching football and women are always attracted to stations showing love films such as zeeworld. Innate skills can also be developed in the process , example is food channel that teaches different cooking techniques. Also, different cuisines both local and foreign can be learnt and such skills transferred to the children.
In addition, the populace socialites via chats on different social platforms and not television. With the advent of mobile phones, people tend to communicate with their phone as against the traditional method as this is more convenient and a faster means of communication. In recent times that people are becoming idle due to addiction to their mobile phone. this is one of the reason for laziness among the public.
In conclusion, television helps people relax after a long days work. it is generally suggested that television reduces productivity and communication among the people. In my opinion, I think television helps know about happenings around the world and it does not discourage socialization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49805447471 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94868528452 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626459143969 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1862954784 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.3125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167397575526 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506288365437 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345341414541 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961336235195 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267442832731 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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