You have a penfriend living in another country and he/she is curious to know about the major news items in your country.
Briefly describe one news story that has been on TV, on the radio or in the newspaper new country and explain why people are interested in it.
Dear honey
I am writing this letter to tell you about the major issue in our country.
Recently, the biggest issue of debate on the television, radio or in newspaper is the rafale deal of the indian Air Force army aircraft.Rafale deal is the agreement off purchasing the next generation air jets for the Indian Army and moreover the pact is signed between india and french government.
Firstly, people are so curious about to know the truth behind the agreement. During the signing the government has decided the evaluated price for each plane is 7000 crores. But now during the current government the deal is resigned and the cost of each plane gradually increases 30% of the original value. Therefore , this creates bad impression on present defence ministry and on citizen anima . Undoubtedly , opposition is demanding for the fair investigation in this high-profile security case and asking for the resign of honourable prime minister.
Lastly, this is the hot topic for debate among every Indian parties are blaming each other to capture vote bank for the upcoming election.
I hope you will be also excited to learn more about this and looking to have some discussions on social media platform.
Thanking you
Yours truly
Navjot Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, lastly, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12621359223 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64418901314 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655339805825 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.024540892 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0905835286605 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409986990112 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482622771612 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0501636177917 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398486198449 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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