Every country should have a free health services, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the services because they are too expensive.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Give reason for your answer.
It is often argued that it is compulsory for all the Nations having free medical facilities in limited sectors of medical field but due to this recently innovative treatments cannot be affordable for the government authorities. I completely agree with this statement that free Health Services be available in all areas. In the following paragraphs we will is look at about this topic.
First of all, it is complementary for the citizens of the country to having Health Services. Even more it removes the worries and anxiety of pupil about the expenses of treatment in expensive hospitals. In the addition, people under poverty can be benefited from this type of schemes. For instance, recently Indian government has initiated national Health cover scheme to give medical facilities to poor people and it covers 10 crore people all over the country. That's why this type of policy can bring huge changes in the health sector and removes need of penury and stress from the faces of common man.
Secondly, it will enhance the health department of every Nation because health is the wealth of the country and citizens will be free from plethora of disease in a short period . Furthermore, it will improve the ranking of nation at Global stage and creates bene phony all over the world. For example, countries of Europe have strong health department as compared to african Nations. In this way, burden of government for health department always be lessened and having more funds for the research and development to improve index in medical field.
To sum up , i would support deliver health services as they create more awareness among citizens and maintains the good economic GDP of nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, look, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02491103203 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59668512999 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555160142349 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8578973086 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311625207751 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116779744229 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858437991255 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18414262288 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902149167687 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.