Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Other, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Society is the name of social groups which live together and help each other to spend their lives in a peaceful and civilized environment. Without proper implementation of rules and regulation and follow up of it, we can’t create a civilized and well managed society. Some people think that it is the responsibility of parents to teach their children about society’s rules and how to become a good member of society, while others think differently. In this discussion I would explain few aspects of both sides.
Young age is the time when children learn things quickly and adopt all which they ...
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