Morbid obesity become a huge threat to the health and wellbeing of the population in many countries. Many factors predisposes for this uncontrolled weight gain, particularly overeating and sedentary life style. we can discuss the potential causes and possible remedies for this issue in this essay.
Nowadays people are able to get enough and more to eat compared to the past, this make some people to do overeating as a habit. The modern fast food culture made people obese even if they will eat less, as it contains more calories, these are the first and foremost cause of obesity. Hereditary and familial history also contribute up to an extent in overweight but the lifestyle causes always stands first, which are called modifyable risk factors. Sedentary lifestyle is the another important factor affecting and worsening this condition, the modern industrial culture makes people lazy and inert, eventually they are gaining weight even though they are dieting well. Alcoholism and soft drinks are the worst things to avoid people with obesity, it will cause not only weight gain but also deteriorate the health abruptly.
People have enormous ways to adopt for loosing weight, like dieting and regular exercises which are proven to be effective. Regular exercises plays an important role in physical and mental wellbeing, besides it will give positive energy in daily life. Pepole should make a plan in their diet and avoid foods that will cause accumulation of fats and carbohydrates, like sugars and fried foods. Fast foods should be avoided and need to add more fibers and vegetables that will aid in good digestion and burn fats. People should give up smoking and alcoholism along with soft drinks are to be excluded.
Overall, Obesity is an annoying health issue that will affect the person physically and emotionally, hence prompt attention should be taken to avoid occurring this condition, as we all know "Prevention is better than cure ".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16300940439 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61138499096 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583072100313 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8105103441 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.642857143 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138795597364 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493080531758 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294566944727 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762997998803 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307437256438 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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