Some people believe law changes human behaviour. Do you agree/disagree?
The importance of law, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of human behavior has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on our world, lives, and society. it can be agreed that there are many people think human behavior is changed by law, but the opponents argue that the law is irrelevant to the changes of people behavior. this essay will elaborate on both the positive and negative impacts of this issue and will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous ways to explain why law has the strengths to change the human behavior, but the most conspicuous one is rooted in the fact that the environmental protection law was published and it punished the people who pollute the environment, which changes these people's behavior to protect the environment they are living. Thus, it is apparent that law has some strengths to affect people to change their normal activities.
Nevertheless, opponents of this trend tend to believe that in some cases law has disadvantages to influence man's behavior, which means that some people still disobey the law and follow traditional customs without changing their behavior. For instance, according to new research from Harvard University, 70% of participants did not obey the new law of greenhouse protection to change their behavior. Therefore, it is obviously true that some people disagree the law can change human activities.
In view of arguments outlined above, one can be concluded that obeying law is prominent, which can change human behavior, although it has a number of drawbacks that should be well handled by the government and law institution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17028985507 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85301873829 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525362318841 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0330448574 50.4703680194 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.7 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.9669160288 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357150470331 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162954886011 0.0925447433944 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120745682127 0.071462118173 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224908812704 0.151781067708 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735763706767 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.