You received a letter from your friend informing you about his elderly parents are coming to visit in your area and he is asking for your advise on
- which places they should visit
- where should they live
- Invite them to do something with you
Dear Ros,
How have you been? It was great to hear from you after so long. I am so glad to hear that they are visitinSingaporere and I would like to assist them in making their stay more memorable and comfortable.
Singapore is a bustling city and one can find a number of adventurous sports such as water sports, sky diving, scuba diving and white sand beaches and the best part about all these activities are that a person of any age can perform. In addition, I would suggest that they must the Chinese Temple in China town and Little India as your mother are inclined towards visiting devotional places. Lodging is not at all an issue as there are plenty of options to choose from, for instance, Airbnb, hotels, motels, apartments and so on. However, among all these options I would propose that they should stay at ABC hotel owing to the panoramic view, lush green gardens and their extravagant hospitality.
Moreover, I am hosting a barbeque party in the next week so that they can get an opportunity to meet my parents and can enjoy homemade food for a day. it would be an honour for me if they can spend some time with me as well.
Looking forward to meeting them soon.
Cheers
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...dventurous sports such as water sports, sky diving, scuba diving and white sand beaches an...
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Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... and can enjoy homemade food for a day. it would be an honour for me if they can s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52073732719 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49038159068 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668202764977 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0184709964 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179048923899 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060097377575 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377994437334 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901977319324 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375498385259 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.