Some people believe that the university main aim is to help graduates for a better jobs. While others believe that university education bring benefits for individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
While some people believe that higher education will bring benefits for students in terms of career occupation, others conceive of better society created from the advantages of university by every citizen. I will discuss both view and give my own reasons.
On the one hand, students have a variety of job options and a good chance of getting more well-paid jobs As the university is a based-foundation to train and provide students with necessary knowledge and skills for them to excel in the future, they can broaden their horizon through studying process and internship. Therefore, it is true to say that the most important purpose of the university is to create the pathway for its graduates in their future career.
On the other hand, individuals and society benefits considerably from the university education. people explore their strong points and weaknesses during their time at campus, so they can develop their apts and improve themselves to adapt to different environment once they have graduated. A strong community built by people who are intellectual, pioneering and community-minded, in which they have learnt to become in the university.
In the summary, as far as I know, university with an aim to raise their graduates' talents up helps create civilized community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, while, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24637681159 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9622312336 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632850241546 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.2054477747 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.75 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294480887648 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126950621813 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982073304855 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175465798795 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12156955254 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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