Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
The past 20 years have seen a considerable increase in the use of technology. There remains question whether the impact of technology on people's relationships is negative or positive, I would argue that this is a positive trend.
The first thing to be considered is that people's means of communication has become more convenient and better than those of the earlier times. Take telephones and the Internet as particular examples, students studying abroad can keep in touch with their family with apps such as Messenger and FaceTime. While in the past it was struggling and time-consuming for people living in faraway places to support contact with their loved ones with forms of written letters and telegrams, these days people have more opportunities to interact with beloved ones thanks to the upsurge of the technology.
Equally important, technology benefits people in terms of business and education. Services like Skype and Facebook help business people have online meetings and make necessary conference without meeting face to face. Also, students can attend online courses according to their preferences with specialised teachers in different nations to broaden their horizon.
Though some people argue that technology causes disadvantages like isolating people and discouraging real life communication. I believe that technology helps create and keep up relationships among people regardless of their age and gender.
In conclusion, it is a positive tendency that technology has changed people's relationships in terms of communication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56779661017 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0425853285 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614406779661 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6348227822 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.454545455 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280482077989 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109103893615 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707295936982 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170231990104 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470721000975 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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