The roles of women and men in this society nowadays.
The roles in which women and men play today, both at home and at work, are radically different from any previous generation, and have been instrumentally changed. However, I feel that while feminism are common, the men still play a critical part in the stability of society these days.
There is no denying the fact that women have contributed considerably to family income and shared the financial burden with the men to balance the responsibilities of members in the family. However, contrary to popular belief that women should also be responsible for the children’s upbringing, it is believed to be maternal instincts that mother give birth to children, bring them up and protect them from external danger.
We also question whether fatherhood should be in a position of responsibility as much as women. Why in the past the breadwinner were to be men and today women are in charge of men’s role? It sounds like a way for women to replace men’s position in a new time and lead their own lives. Nevertheless, it is by no means a good notion to encourage the practice of this dramatic change. As a few women come back home and see their husband sleeping with babies and they have to carry heavy housework and work to raise family up.
Given this argument, it is reasonable to conclude that if every member of the society is aware of the responsibilities between women and men, the equality can be ensured and the benefits to all people are enormous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81422924901 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8817563528 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592885375494 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4242996977 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.8 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329229997299 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125008155364 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765571010075 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195508060018 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621049420063 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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