Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Arline, the Senior Manager of the "Cloud Migration Team" at "ABC Consulting" company at Bangalore, India. I am writing this letter after having learned about your upcoming seminar at London about "Use of Artificial Intelligence in Integration and Migration on cloud Security", regarding this I need a few details from your side.
As we are already in Cloud Migration System so having knowledge of Artificial Intelligence on it will be a beneficial input for us. Firstly, is there something that we should prerequisite prepared for before attending the use of Artificial Intelligence. Although, advert only provide information seminar is in London, but still the venue, date and time related facts are unconfirmed and for how many days the program will scheduled. Secondly, I am also curious about the keynote speaker at the seminar, also, I am not able to find detail on your website about the registration fee for individual as well as for the group. Please let me know about if any discount is there for group registration, as some of my colleagues are also interested to join the seminar. Lastly, kindly advise me whether the accommodation for attendees will be provided by the organizers or we have to arrange them by self.
I look forward to hearing from you soon with all details.
Yours faithfully,
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'schedule'
Suggestion: schedule
... and for how many days the program will scheduled. Secondly, I am also curious about the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1981981982 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11705202244 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.720100485 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 4.34317383033 251% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1621097157 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586162245618 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481412682523 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087682429046 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528101296048 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 70.7449484536 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 7.45979381443 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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