The advantages and disadvantages of the Internet.
The internet is a big global information system. The term ''internet'' first came into use in 1974. Nowadays, it is popular everywhere in the world. However, like every single innovation in science and technology, it has its own advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly, information is probably the biggest advantage that internet offers. We can share information with other people around the world through the internet and stay up date with the latest news. There are many search engines on the internet such as google.com, yahoo.com, search.com, etc. Secondly, the internet can let a person connect to many people all over the world. It is easier to get in touch with your friends or make friends with foreigners by chatting, email messages, forum and so on. Thirdly, we can use many services on the internet such as online banking, job seeking, purchasing movie tickets, and hotel reservations. Especially, we can see movies, listen to music or play games on the internet. Besides, online education is also popular. Many websites provide lectures, books and documents on different subjects or topics. There are many education websites in Viet Nam such as hocmai.com, hoc247.net, Online Math, etc.
On the other hand, the internet also has many disadvantages. It is harmful to our health because some people spend too much time on searching and playing games on the internet, so that it is not good for their brains, eyes and spines. It also prevents them from reading books or going out with their friends. In addition, some programmes on the internet contain some bad content which are not good for young people's mental life. The next disadvantage is the wastage of time. Sometimes we spend too much time on listening to music, watching films, chatting, online shopping or checking emails so that we do not get time to rest. Another disadvantage is the virus. These viruses create different problems in our computers, they can attack our privacy and get some or all of information about us. Besides, online game addiction is a big disadvantage of the internet. Violence, fight and shooting games are very popular on the internet, so that some young people which are addictive to these games may become killers and crimes. It is so dangerous.
In conclusion, the internet is really useful and neccessary and it is also dangerous for our life so that we should balance between study or work and play and know how to use the internet well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97549019608 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69502653276 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522058823529 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1869882303 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0769230769 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.96153846154 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295983094054 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862097944457 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838617695103 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172783924935 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293803959714 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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