Some people believe that the Olympics games do not have a role in 21st Century. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.
Sports have been playing an important role in lives of the people. Some people claim that Olympics games are no longer needed in the 21st Century due to the lack of popularity as well as fewer career opportunities. However, i strongly disagree with this claim as Olympics events provide the youth the opportunity to display their talent at an international level as well as provide a global platform for many nations to come together.
In many countries, Olympics sports are not quite well known among the common people. For example, in India the game of Cricket is much more popular than Olympics games like shot-put and archery and thus, people think Olympics games are not significant. In addition, there are very less opportunities to make a career in Olympics. To illustrate, unlike Hockey or Football, there are hardly any national or state level championships conducted for the sport of Javelin throw, and therefore not many consider these games as a source to earn income.
On the contrary, Olympics competitions have led to the world recognition of many young talents. For instance, the RIO Olympics events have given the youth a chance to showcase their capabilities and passion on an international level. Moreover, Olympics events have made it possible for many nations around the world to unite together and have the opportunity to witness the talent of the participants. This in turn, will lead to more opportunities in future for sports persons to live their dreams.
To recapitulate, the decision whether Olympics games have an important part in the coming future or not is a controversial one. In my opinion, I think that Olympics games are a necessity because they motivate many young athletes to follow their passion as well as play a vital role in uniting countries around the world.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-02 | Olga Karaseva | 56 | view |
| 2019-03-02 | khyatidamani | 73 | view |
- You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit.Write a letter to your friend. In your letterExplain the important eventApologize for the sitautionSuggest a new arrangement 73
- Music should not be taught in schools. Instead other subjects such as computers and science should be taught. DO you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
- Some people say that artists such as painters, writers and musicians affect our life more than scientists. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience. (Hong Kong - April 2018) 84
- You have recently been on a business trip to see some equipment that your company needs Write a letter to the company that owns this equipment and say Describe the equipment Ask for the features and specifications of this equipment Explain why your compan 96
- Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations, while others believe they should get one long vacation. Give the advantages of both and express your own point of view. (Feb – 2018) 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun opportunities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ignificant. In addition, there are very less opportunities to make a career in Olymp...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04666666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79642629082 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526666666667 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1468848402 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.461538462 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186146084706 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702646453344 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362189576961 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122045367374 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239416586215 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.