To commence with, many countries develop nuclear power as a security purpose because they know well about its dangoures effect. Moreover, it is highly hazardous not only for citizens also for a nation. It can be destroy a country whithin a minutes if people used it wrongly. Additionally, it is used to take revenge by one country to another country. For example, in Japan there was nuclear weapon leakage and countless human had died, everyone can never forget that incident and all well known about that.
Moving further, its advantage are, it is provide electercity several people and nuclear power do not effct the environment. Furthermore, nuclear energy do not emit greenhouse gases in surrounding areas. It helps to burn fossil fuel also. However, nuclear weapon are powerful defence to their own country.
To conclude, it is ganually dangrous for a country and can destroy the whole nation. People needs to be aware on it and used it for energy purpose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...oving further, its advantage are, it is provide electercity several people and nuclear ...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ing areas. It helps to burn fossil fuel also. However, nuclear weapon are powerful d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 31.9359605911 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 1207.87684729 67% => OK
No of words: 161.0 242.827586207 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01242236025 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.92707691288 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5945193041 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 139.433497537 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 379.143842365 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0896603161 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3636363636 104.977214359 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172251666242 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648119662425 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765630347174 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116026519699 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107131558312 0.0609392437508 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 12.6369458128 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.