Reservation is common in most developing countries for paving way for overall growth. Social imbalances need to be fixed and this is a tool that the government has used for a while now. Oppression or concentration of wealth and power does not help for all members of the country to explore and learn. Unfortunately, women have also borne the brunt of the same. Suffrage came into existence only in the past centuries and liberalisation is still work in progress.
To begin with, child care and family is often thrust on women. So ,their careers and ambitions tend to take a back seat. Conservative families and cultures do not help matters. However, this is not to say that they are less capable. Study shows that women use their left and right brains more often than not. They tend to be more communal, multi-talented and empathetic. Also, people management becomes a basic skill every woman needs to possess to succeed, at least in her personal life.
They tend to be less demanding, more united and rather hardworking. There have been considerable instances where they have been rather industrious and dexterous. Given this and the one sided patriarchal society we belong with, some concessions seem fair. One even if a woman spends her entire life dedicated to the kids she doesn't even get any recognition for it. Let us face it, our surnames do not reflect our mother's hard work and gives credits only to the fathers. Similarly, even in matrimonial ceremony the father gives away the daughter the mother bore and took pains to bring into this world. Be it religion or tradition these are pretty one sided.
At least, workplace can foster some equality. If poorer sections of the society can receive doles, then poorly treated members need their share of the pie. With the right education, mentoring and training they can certainly complement the men and be a useful asset. It is high time for the survival of the fittest. Even in exams or sports lot of girls are stealing the lime light. Healthy competition will only work for the better and benefit the community. Thus, it becomes pretty productive to pave way for their growth in different spheres of life.
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 56
- Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects, while others claim that students should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion? 84
- The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2013-2012. 73
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 56
- The chart below shows the percentage of difference in income between men and women from 1978 to 2008 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and family is often thrust on women. So ,their careers and ambitions tend to take...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, similarly, so, still, then, thus, while, at least, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5956691381 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617250673854 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4749902539 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.3076923077 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2692307692 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.19230769231 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111410361075 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273119819257 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357798509038 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648423717416 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286938865891 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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