The charts below show the number of French adults whose parents spoke a French regional language to them when they were children and the number who speak a French regional language to their own children

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The charts below show the number of French adults whose parents spoke a French regional language to them when they were children and the number who speak a French regional language to their own children.

A breakdown of the number of speakers of French regional language who communicate with their children using their own language and the proportion of French adults who received French local language in regularly or partially when they were young is depicted in the two bar charts.

Most of the French adults have parents who speak Occitan language when they were children with by far the highest (1.6 million people). Nonetheless, parents who grew up with Alsatian language more like to use their language to communicate with their children with slightly above a half million than the former language with approximately 300 thousand.

There are a few balance figures for the French adults who acquired Creole and Corsican language from their parents compared with the proportion of these speakers as parents talking to their children roughly a hundred thousand. In contrast, overall parents applying the Breton language in their daily conversation with their offspring is one in six of the adult number who got this language acquisition when they were kids in habitually or occasionally.

Overall, the number of French adults whose parents spoke Occitan language in any events was the highest while the Alsatian language is the most common usage in the communication from French parents to offspring.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
nonetheless, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29326923077 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64972767804 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.9279111483 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 183.5 112.824112599 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 22.9334400587 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.545409423648 0.215688989381 253% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.31926455892 0.103423049105 309% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12062548337 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.381462856892 0.15604864568 244% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095516707728 0.0819641961636 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.2329268293 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 61.2550243902 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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