The two maps below show the changes in town of Denham from 1986 to the present day.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the transformations in town of Denham during 23 year period.
Overall, it is obvious that the area was completely modernized in the period from 1986 onward with the crowded accommodations.
The shops to the north-west of the town were replaced by new flats over the period thanks to the expansion of road system. The government removed the farmland in order to add new road in the central and develop accommodation system along the river in the south-west of the map.
Some new houses are constructed where the farmland once stood in the north-east of the town. The present time witnessed an extension in size of primary school. In the center of the east side, there was a shrink in area of the gardens to makes room for some houses and the large house was converted into the retirement home. There has been had less changes in the south-east of the map until now. Many houses are built to full of the space at the edge of the river.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 344, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun changes is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...the retirement home. There has been had less changes in the south-east of the map un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65697674419 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6039957128 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610465116279 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0713558335 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.222222222222 5.23603664747 4% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127211651864 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508602603428 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338559951329 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758502086318 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029222502364 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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