You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
Explain why are you selling the television
Describe the television
Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.
Dear Annie
Hope you are doing well!
I am writing to you because I've decided to sell my television as I received a new television from my brother as a gift. Our previous chat striked my mind that you are intending to buy a similar model. So, I thought I should ask you out.
Let me tell you that the television is in excellent condition and has not caused any problem till date. It is a 55cm LED - a product by Samsung. It has various features. The prominent one is the access to internet. Also, you can record your favorite programs while at work and watch them later.
I really want you to buy it from me. This gonna proves the best deal at such a nominal price of INR 10000/-. You can visit my place on saturday evening this weekend. I'll be home and you can check the commodity and make your mind then only
In hope to see you this Saturday
With love
Rhythm
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 29, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...oing well! I am writing to you because Ive decided to sell my television as I rece...
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Line 8, column 167, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...place on saturday evening this weekend. Ill be home and you can check the commodity...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30120481928 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24688979501 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674698795181 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7079616982 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.5 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319797623229 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100085042847 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837738990944 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17281464106 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036534668934 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.