One of your colleagues recently got a new job at another company.
write a letter to him/her and say
how you feel about him/ her
what you enjoyed the most while working together and
ask what his/her future plans are
Dear Sam,
Hope your doing good, I am glad to know that you got a new job in one of the top trending company.
I really feel proud and joyful that you got selected to work with the well renowned organisation,it was a dream for you to work with such a top company in the market and it's a pleasure to watch a close mates who had got a great opportunity and excelled in very aspect like you.I always had the complete trust and confidence on you that you will do big on your career.It was a great pleasure to work with you a colleague and I have learnt a lot from you in career perspective and learnt how to have a balance work life. You have been such an inspiration to me and all other colleagues in our organisation.
I know that you will have plans running on your mind, being your close friend more than a colleague i have understood your further course action and plans .But I can never predict your moves at certain stages as your very smart enough to handle things, Do let me know your future plans and am expecting for some good news as you told me that your planning to get married.
Cheers mate, hope you and your family is all fine , please do keep in touch and my mobile number and my house address remains the same, so you can ring me anytime or walk up to my house as its always open for you and one gorgeous women will give you yummy food at anytime as u know it's my mother.
Warm Regard's
Sarath
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
Dear Sam, Hope your doing good, I am glad to know that you ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...work with the well renowned organisation,it was a dream for you to work with such a...
^^^
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...th such a top company in the market and its a pleasure to watch a close mates who h...
^^^
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ty and excelled in very aspect like you.I always had the complete trust and confi...
^
Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...you that you will do big on your career.It was a great pleasure to work with you a...
^^
Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ood your further course action and plans .But I can never predict your moves at ce...
^^
Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...d your further course action and plans .But I can never predict your moves at certa...
^^^
Line 4, column 290, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...s, Do let me know your future plans and am expecting for some good news as you tol...
^^
Line 4, column 342, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
... for some good news as you told me that your planning to get married. Cheers mate, ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...te, hope you and your family is all fine , please do keep in touch and my mobile n...
^^
Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ive you yummy food at anytime as u know its my mother. Warm Regards Sarath
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 274.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18248175182 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23456246757 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 355.5 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 16.3608247423 275% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 176.487409057 44.8134815571 394% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 191.0 76.5299724578 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.6666666667 16.8248392259 271% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261145295116 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123068191955 0.0766984524023 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692749502629 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170248912714 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359633881013 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 8.37731958763 252% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 7.45979381443 232% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 7.85 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 8.62886597938 307% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 8.54432989691 234% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.