Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or is it the responsibility of producers?
Packaging is one of the key factor that is being considered by manufacturers to deliver products and meet customer’s satisfaction. However, Over packaging is costing the well being of customers and environment. Producers should take a stand to cut down this issue.
To Begin ,Over packaging not only cuts off the pockets of customers but also costs the producers despite their profit or loss in the market. For example, Subway wraps it’s subs in a sheet and covers with one more layer of sheet and packs it in a cover and then hand it over to the costumer. Hence, this effects the price of sub and also costs the manufacturers for package materials. Instead ,if a sub is packed in a box or a single sheet then it mutually benefit the customers and the producers in terms of cost and production.
On the other hand, Disposing theover packaging materials like plastic papers, boxes , etc effects the ecosystem. Decomposition of these materials results in emission of excess CO2 which effects the environment. Every paper that is being used is costing a tree which is one of the vital causes for global warming. Hence, Reduction of over packaging could also play a key role in saving the environment.
In Conclusion,Producers should take a stand and take necessary steps to avoid the over packaging of products and concentrate on quality of the products which would eventually benefit the customersand also saveour ecosystem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02928870293 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01218589879 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531380753138 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.678709238 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.166666667 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220072863614 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828136606813 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699094703917 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154493395904 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766349043414 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.