The effects when children live in rich families or have famous parents
Being born in a wealthy family means that a child can enjoy the best conditions for his full development, regarding from his education to his entertainment. Firstly, rich parents always provide ideal academic opportunities for their offspring so that they can gain exceptional education by sending them to well-known international schools, allowing them to study abroad or simply buying them the best material for their studying. Besides, children can learn whatever they wish, no matter how costly the subject is. Secondly, there are increasing forms of entertainment which are for affluent families only. It seems very difficult and expensive for a middle-class family can afford such entertainment. Moreover, it is usually seen that children from upper-class families take their holidays in other countries instead of national destinations.
The state of living in a wealthy and famous family may have several negative effects on children. In fact, many children are affected by the Inquisition from other people, which are often unpleasant and hurtful. Not only that, bad words about their renowned fathers or mothers on the Internet can also hurt their feelings and thinking. On the other hand, it is the wealth that can lead to the sense of self-centeredness in many children. The reason for this is that they are overindulged in their own space, which makes them have a tendency to act if they were important people when they are in new places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21794871795 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90854901783 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623931623932 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8712646768 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229381368517 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866088535156 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112541469235 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171822815546 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546767849631 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.