The graph below shows the percentage change in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
The chart provides information regarding a comparison in percentage of overseas graduate students from universities that base on regions in Canada between 2001 and 2006.
Overall, the percentage of international students who graduated in different Canadian provinces in 2006 was considerably higher than those in 2001 although only the percentages in Alberta showed the reverse.
According to the graph, in 2001 there were just about 3-7 percent graduate pupils from abroad per each region in Canada. However, the next five years, the percentage of the overseas pupils were about 3-8 percent high...
- The diagram below shows a simple device for changing sea water to drinking water Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- Some people say that success is 10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work Is hard work the key to success or is talent also important 60
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree and disagree? 55
- The charts below show information about honey bee colonies and honey production in US Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the the main features and make comparisons where relevant 47
- In many parts of the world, children’s lives were different from today. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of life fo children in the past? 77
flaws:
'which' is not used properly in the essay. Check out online how to use 'which','that'
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 10
No. of Words: 171 200
No. of Characters: 881 1000
No. of Different Words: 95 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.616 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.152 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.801 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 67 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 52 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.274 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.565 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.856 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.158 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4