You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• Tell him which team won
• Describe the conditions on the day
• Say how you felt about the match
Dear Jacob,
How are you keeping up and I hope you are recovering fast? I'm writing to update you on the outcome of our football match with Chelsea football Club.
As you know, the game was scheduled for March 19, 2019 and it was held as promised. Gladly, our team won the game narrowly with a two goals to one to the opposing team. Although, the game was though because Chelsea scored first within twenty seconds the started. This put so much pressure on us knowing we couldn't afford to lose the match and be kicked out of the tournament.
it was a rainy day as the weather was cloudy all through the day and we had to play the match inside the drizzling. I think we did well as a team. however, we would have done better if you were around to play the defence role in the game.
Please rest well and I wish you a speedy recovery.
Regards,
Jones
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jacob, How are you keeping up and I hope you ar...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... up and I hope you are recovering fast? Im writing to update you on the outcome of...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elsea scored first within twenty seconds the started. This put so much pressure o...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...s put so much pressure on us knowing we couldnt afford to lose the match and be kicked ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...nd be kicked out of the tournament. it was a rainy day as the weather was clou...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...izzling. I think we did well as a team. however, we would have done better if you were ...
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Line 11, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wish you a speedy recovery. Regards, Jones
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34567901235 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15119692831 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641975308642 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2354397716 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208857180656 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731693969433 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498984849569 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12706425814 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469739415237 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.