Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
In fact, the meaning of transportation for human beings has changed rapidly through the history. I guess it’s crucial to take quick glance at this argument on both sides. In one hand there are many people prefer cars than other types of transportations but in the other hand some people using ships,air plane and trains for moving from one place to the other .Moreover it will be difficult to predict the future of transportation . Eventually I concur with the first group of people whose prefer using cars so I think more cars will be usable within the 20 upcoming years because of many reasons I will explain in the next paragraphs.
Firstly , the first reason that we need to pointed out is that the cities getting bigger also many people moving from the rural areas to metropolitans areas seeking for better life style, different environment and healthy societies. So the populations are increasing with time .That affect the cars industry as well, Moreover the cars getting cheaper and becoming more comfortable to use .Therefore most of the population having more than one car and that’s why the number of cars being more than the last few years.
Secondly, In my opinion cars are the best any easier way for moving from one place to another .In contrast to the trains and ships which are more difficult to find in any time during a day for transportation .Nowadays most of the people using cars and that’s why it will be more cars in the near future horizon, say 20 years from now especially with the future technological improvement and how the car’s industry being one of the most economical business world nation.
Additionally, the cars getting cheaper, so the luxury car will be affordable by many people. For example nowaday in UAE they are using the most expensive cars for police and government and that will cost the government a lot of money and raise the life expense for population as well but after 20 years the thing will change and the cars will be much less than today. Moreover the young people prefer riding these luxury cars just for pretending that they have healthy bunk account and they are rich even if they couldn't afford it now , they can get the luxury cars after 20 years because it will be cheaper than today.
Finally, to wrap it up I strongly agree that after 20 years from now, the number of cars will become ascending. In a nutshell, in fact, there are multiplicity of other factors supplementing the aforementioned statements, which could be alluded here, but are not embraced due to the dearth of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, i guess, i think, in contrast, in fact, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2123.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78153153153 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60128279353 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490990990991 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.845073384 48.9658058833 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.916666667 100.406767564 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 20.6045352989 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8333333333 5.45110844103 272% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28090682292 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116477696979 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760140512532 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169577907496 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405086660533 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 11.7677419355 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 58.1214874552 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.1575268817 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.