The maps below show recent changes in the town of kimsville.
The map illustrate the new developments and adjustment in the town Kimsville . Overall , there are two maps compered before and after the development of the town.
Firstly , there on the first map is showing the town in 2002 before the constructions of the facilities which there was only a shopping Centre , factory , old cinema and four forest zone
Secondly , Kimsville today has been renovate so much that it could not be easily recognized.
There have been built just 3 new buildings which they are: new apartments, new train station and new a football stadium , also there have been some replacements of the old buildings with a software company and pub. The things which have not been replaced or renovate are the shopping Centre and the city Centre .However , because of these new adjustments the nature environment was affected and the half of the nature of city was cut down.
In summary , There were a significant changes in the town , although it is with its half nature environment now it is bigger and with more facilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The map illustrate the new developments and adjustment in ...
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Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nts and adjustment in the town Kimsville . Overall , there are two maps compered b...
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Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...justment in the town Kimsville . Overall , there are two maps compered before and ...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the development of the town. Firstly , there on the first map is showing the t...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s which there was only a shopping Centre , factory , old cinema and four forest zo...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ere was only a shopping Centre , factory , old cinema and four forest zone Sec...
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Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'zone' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'zones'.
Suggestion: zones
... , factory , old cinema and four forest zone Secondly , Kimsville today has been...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...actory , old cinema and four forest zone Secondly , Kimsville today has been reno...
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Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cinema and four forest zone Secondly , Kimsville today has been renovate so mu...
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Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'renovated'.
Suggestion: renovated
... Secondly , Kimsville today has been renovate so much that it could not be easily re...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vate so much that it could not be easily recognized. There have been built just ...
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Line 6, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...train station and new a football stadium , also there have been some replacements ...
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Line 6, column 310, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... the shopping Centre and the city Centre .However , because of these new adjustmen...
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Line 6, column 312, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...he shopping Centre and the city Centre .However , because of these new adjustments the ...
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Line 6, column 319, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ping Centre and the city Centre .However , because of these new adjustments the na...
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Line 6, column 425, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ected and the half of the nature of city was cut down. In summary , There were...
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Line 8, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ure of city was cut down. In summary , There were a significant changes in the...
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Line 8, column 39, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'change'?
Suggestion: change
... In summary , There were a significant changes in the town , although it is with its ...
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Line 8, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e were a significant changes in the town , although it is with its half nature en...
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Line 8, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hanges in the town , although it is with its half nature environment now it is bi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94285714286 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71011955294 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6235192693 43.030603864 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.166666667 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 5.23603664747 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135904201977 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899317052452 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676112414319 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885662615981 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789575902231 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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