Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and individuals can tackle these problems.
Nowadays, there are more and more people migrating to the big cities in the hope of finding a better life. This exodus of citizens has created various negative impacts on society. This essay will discuss the consequences which are caused by overpopulation in metropolises and put forward several solutions for this issue.
Overpopulation in cities can decrease citizens’ living standard. Put simply, there is a lack of social welfare due to over demanding and the government cannot provide enough for everyone in a short period of time. For example, overcrowded schools cannot pay attention to individual students better than a good number of student class. People do not receive decent health care in hospitals because the number of patients outweighs the number of staff. In sum, when the speed of migrants to the big cities is not compatible with the speed of development, citizens cannot maintain their quality of life.
The secondary major effect of overpopulation in urban areas is damaging the environment. There is a significant increase of the number of households in cities due to the migration. This means that the amount of waste disposal to the environment, especially to the water and the soil relatively expands. Traffic congestion also contributes to air pollution as there are more vehicles on the roads. The overdevelopment of cosmopolitan has put huge negative impacts on our nature.
There are several measures that government and individuals can take to tackle the issue. Firstly, industrial zones should be expanded to the outside of the cities to attract workers. Secondly, infrastructure and public transportation which help to connect satellite cities to the big cities should also be improved. Thirdly, each individual can contribute by finding their jobs in their hometowns.
This essay discussed the problems of overcrowded cities and suggested some actions to help to balance out the issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 204, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... provide enough for everyone in a short period of time. For example, overcrowded schools canno...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33114754098 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01463598125 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544262295082 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8904389398 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.3333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0890497195001 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312711603013 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500123643363 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0466141154539 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248383915693 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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