A few folks trust that the family has the most vital effect on the youths while others believe that friends have the greatest impact. Discuss and give opinion.
Youngsters are considered to be the most essential part of any progressive society of any country. Some camp says that family influenced the young lots whereas others opine that the peers have greater effect rather than family but I personally think both are equally important for the holistic outlook and personality of a young individual.I will delve deeper and examine the both aspects with my view.
To begin with, one of the significant reason of family influence is the upbringing. An individual character and outlook depends on his/her upbringing. For instance. an abusive father will automatically badly influenced his kids. Secondly, the beliefs, religious choices, food choices, languages and cultural preferences all are highly impacted by family
On the flip side, youngsters spend more time with their peer group, so, they automatically give a remarkable influence on the blooming birds. Sometimes, to get extra attention, they try to imitate their friends. The adolescence is period in which teenagers consider their friends to be their well wishers.
To conclude, in this age, they need proper attention and guidance to keep themselves aware of bad company but both are equally important for their proper growth. Family can give extra attention and love during this age to look after and provide proper guidance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36666666667 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75757049073 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652380952381 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.6038347793 50.4703680194 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.7 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107106785224 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313909772908 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332169939997 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570279933525 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284561297748 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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