Your neighbours have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter:– describe the problem with the dog– explain why it is important for you to sleep– outline what your neighbours could do about th

Dear John,

I am writing you to complain about a noise from your apartment during the night. Literally, your dog is too loud. It barks with no reason for hours.

I went to bed at midnight. After about 10 minutes after that your pet started barking. Initially, I thought maybe it has a reason explaining its behavior. Then I looked in a window to found a source of disturbing your dogs but I could not. Finally, it stopped to bark as suddenly as it started. So I felt as I can fall a sleep but it was happening in a loop for the next two hours at least. It was really annoying.

This fact of bothering neighbors is not appropriate. It is vital for me to sleep well due to early working hours. Therefore, it might affect my performance, health and well-being overall.

Please try to sort this issue out as soon as possible. I could enroll for a dog training to explain your dog it how to behave in society. I believe it might help to educate it moreover it will be taught by other essential skills.

Yours sincerely,
Petr Savchenko

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... sleep well due to early working hours. Therefore it might affect my performance, health ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: learning
...ible. I could enroll for a dog training to learn it how to behave in society. I believe ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll be taught by other essential skills. Yours sincerely, Petr Savchenko
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, look, may, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, well, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47894736842 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57938234785 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673684210526 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1548122152 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.0588235294 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.1764705882 16.8248392259 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302772582263 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747790822263 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753337908899 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151341651269 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109724813003 0.0580467560999 189% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.52 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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