The bar graphs illustrate the trend of marriage and divorce among people in seven European countries and Japan in 1981 and 1994.
It can be clearly seen that the tendency in data about married people changed more steadily for eight countries in 1981 and 1994, while the figure for divorced fluctuated in the mentioned period.
In 1981, the number of people wedding in USA reached an all time high of approximately 10000 and then the figure in 1994 declined slightly to around 9000. In five European countries, the UK, Finland, Germany, France and Italy, it was observed a stability in the marriage rate, just over 6000 in 1981. However, in 1994 there was a slowly decreased in the number of people which married, particularly France saw the most tendency in decline in mentioned period. Similarly with European countries, in Japan the figure for married people was equal in both years and made up around 6000. There is the different pattern in Denmark, which the figure for marriage rose from 5,000 people to approximately 6,000 people over a period of 13 years.
Regarding the divorce statistic, it was noticeable that there was the highest figure for Americans about 5000. While Italy had the least divorces at nearly zero. Interestingly, Germany remained steady at 2 per thousand people from 1981 to 1994.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...endency in decline in mentioned period. Similarly with European countries, in Japan the f...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the highest'.
Suggestion: was the highest
...statistic, it was noticeable that there was highest figure for Americans about 5 per thousa...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... Americans about 5 per thousand people. While Italy had the least divorces at nearly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, similarly, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0045045045 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55413349734 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558558558559 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8675957579 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.1 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236512134611 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103145117704 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815959953154 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18683385792 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779123044209 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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