In many countries there are fewer children than before. Do you think it is positive trend?
In today's modern world the quantity of children is rapidly declining due to various factors. From my point of view this is a negative trend which will lead the world to disastrous consequences.
Changes in some of the age category of the population mainly affect the quality of life.
Firstly, this trend lead to an acceleration of the aging process of the nation. For instance, according to the scientific articles in many European countries especially in East for this reason has already been observed the shortage of workforce. That will create a backlog in many advanced global industries such as IT technology, education, healthcare etc. Therefore the next one consequence of this trend is the deterioration of the country's economy as a whole. Decline of the country's exports, higher prices for goods and services are as the examples of such a situation.
According to many research publications, children are an indicator of the country's scientific potential, so that a reduction in their number leads the country to a slowdown in this direction and lag in further development. This is the third reason of negative trend. Reduction children leads to an increase in the elderly, which affects the country's budget. Because the country will have to increase spending, for examples, on pension funds and health care for struggle with incident of chronic illnesses.
In conclusion a negative consequence of decreasing the number children have a destructive effect on the country, because the gaps in human resources and minds appear and create a country lag.
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Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, therefore, third, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22134387352 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91397918052 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541501976285 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4753127999 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.615384615 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180641705465 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658909966013 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354268897496 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867519842124 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559999840863 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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