you bought a new home recently and you want to hire an interior decorator. write a letter to interior decorator seeking information about his services.
in your letter;
let him know how you came to know about his work or name.
specify about your home.
discuss your furnishing taste
Dear Mark,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing in reference to find out more information about services you provide for interior decoration of apartments. Let me explain in detail
To elucidate I recently visited my friend in jersey who availed your interior decoration services for his newly purchased flat. I was impressed by the modification done on the ceiling of the master bedroom especially the turquoise lights attached to the ceiling provided an appealing look additionally the work done in living room especially on walls provided a fresh look to the house. Hence I would like to avail your professional services for my newly purchased apartment which has one master room, common room and living hall cum kitchen.
I would like to highlight here that my preference would be used dark color shades on the walls additionally I would love to have the same modification on the ceiling as you have done at my friend’s house in jersey as it provides an elegant look to the room.
I look forward to your response and discussing things in detail when we meet in person.
Yours faithfully
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mark, Hope this letter finds you in the pink o...
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... of apartments. Let me explain in detail To elucidate I recently visited my frien...
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...lls provided a fresh look to the house. Hence I would like to avail your professional...
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...ommon room and living hall cum kitchen. I would like to highlight here that my p...
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...t provides an elegant look to the room. I look forward to your response and disc...
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...en we meet in person. Yours faithfully Said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89690721649 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77444114149 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.2402642069 44.8134815571 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192496453677 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957420032928 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694126512471 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117178131811 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096711125567 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.