Dear Mansu,
I hope this letter of mine find you and your family in ravishing health. I am writing to apologize to you for not being able to return an important book that I had borrowed from you in our last term of college.
It is been a while since we are not in contact with each other, and I remember vividly, how much you have helped me out in my studies. But later after college, I got involved in my language studies and the job search, and time flies in the following years. Recently, I have moved into my new home, during the shit I found the textbook, which filled me with nostalgia. In curiosity, I started to flip the pages and able to recognize your notes over it, also, you had mentioned it was the last thing from your grandfather as a gift. Eventually, I realized how vital the value of that book is for you.
To correct my mistake, I tried to reach you at your old house but found that you have already in China with your family. I would like to return the book with one gift as a mark of our friendship. Please confirm your exact address, so that I can parcel it to you.
Hope to hear from you soon, give my best to your family.
Best Regards,
Anna
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23451327434 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23086533035 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592920353982 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.48936214 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.75 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44554963389 0.216113520407 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148366462402 0.0766984524023 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109071798345 0.0603063233224 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278468612226 0.12726935374 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118926187418 0.0580467560999 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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