Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.use specific reasons and examples.
Nowadays, television and movies are major source for entertainment for young people. Now, people can more easily access television and movie in mobile and laptops. Movies and television have more negative effects or positive effects it is debated question among the experts. Some people believes that social media has positive impact on young people while some people has opposite point of view.Personally,i believe that movies and television is harmful for people.I feel this way for few reasons,which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all, young people are more inclined to watch movies that have brutal scenes. These types of horror movies have negative impact on people's mind. This leads to bad impact on mind.As a results, decrease the concentration of people.If people watch television for longer time then it can impaired the vision. Because ultraviolet rays of television are harmful for eyes. Therefore , in recent scenario, many propel has weak vision and it is leads to cataracts in early age.
Secondly, People are addicted to watch television for longer time.It is waste of time.Eventually they can not concentrate on their study. In one research it was proved that, people who watch television everyday they were poor in their academic record. Researchers also noticed that people who watch movie or any television programmed continually for long time they were fatty and lazy. Additionally they told that they were not healthy as well.So, if this people give some time for their study and exercise then they can come out from this situation.
However, all telivision show and movie are not bad. It is depend on that genre.Educational shows and regular affairs which are important show for people.By televison, they can get knowledge more easily . Movies which are motivational they have good impact on young people.So, media are not bad if they have been watched in limitation.
In conclusion,television and media has more negative impact then possitive impact.It is waste of time and way to lose of good health. Having a good habit will useful in life .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22551928783 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85536434389 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516320474777 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8314278559 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8333333333 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.5376344086 614% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23366126484 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935358101778 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838232317933 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143664200728 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890808486574 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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