Question: Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, with the effect of globalization, people can buy similar products in anywhere in the world. In my opinion, this is development is warranted. there is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most prominent one is that, as it is claimed time consuming and money wastage may reduce due to this apprehension. As an example when need of a vehicle spare parts, now no need to travel to the country which made the car to get the part. local spare parts dealers have the same product with many varieties to choose.
Moreover, factual evidence of enhancement of globalization could be witnessed with the guarantee of this move. this may pave the way to realise about gaps and limitation about the international market and this also tend to escalate new universal employments and exposure. According the statistic reports, because of the availability of same products in every knook and corner from the world, the cultural awareness and the unity of nation also risen among the countries. people also get different cultural experience because of this move such as trying different food like sushi.
Furthermore, most of us have sense that this development negatively so destructive which limits and tears down the economy of the countries local products and also tend to escalate lack of uniqueness within the nations.
To sum up, in the view of the arguments outlined above, as such there are merits and demerits of this development, I can conclude that countries become similar and buy the same goods in anywhere is a good sign of development but the national uniqueness should be secured without collapsing the economy of the countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82049800385 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561594202899 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.161797593 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256256592649 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851010152445 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655002212112 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145922438948 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248351888128 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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