Which of the following jobs would you prefer to have?
- A job at a company that offers challenging and interesting projects but few vacation days?
- A job at a company that does not challenge you, but offers a lot of vacation days?
Use details and examples to support your choice. An effective essay is usually 300 words long.
When giving a job offer, it is critically important to choose what type of job you should accept and why. In my opinion, I would prefer a challenging job, full of effort and determination. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, jobs full of challenges require professionals more competitive and aggressive. Moreover, when a professional is happy with his or her job, the performance is usually higher. For this reason, professionals need to stay up to date with all the requirements that the profession demands. My personal experience is a compelling example of that. Twenty years ago, when I graduate from university, I did not have a hard time looking for a job. The demand was high and the qualifications were lower. Apply for a Pharmacist position was as simple as to fill out an application form and pass an interview. As time pass by, more and more students graduated in the same field and more regulations were added to my profession in order to comply with the National Board requisites. My Curriculum Vitae was not enough; I also needed twenty hours of Continuing Education every two years to maintain my license active, a Certificate of Immunization and an Intensive English Program as well. For this motive, I had to take several courses and seminars to comply with the requisites. Furthermore, I was so determined to excel that I went to FIU for the english program because I graduated from a foreign institution. It took me two years to accomplish it, but it was worthy. For all these reasons mention above, I feel more confident and secure about myself now since I can compete and excel. I have all the tools to do it.
Secondly, interesting projects are more fun and challenging than ordinary work. It is a fact that happy workers can make a huge impact in a company and increase the company’s expectations and productivity as well. Although it is crucial for our mental health to have vacations from time to time, in my opinion is more important when we feel happy in our job, because it is there where we spent most of our time. I remember two years ago when our pharmacy was selected to work in a new project. We spent almost two months working intensively, without going home. Moreover, we were stressed with the new task during the day, but we enjoyed the time we spent together because we were doing a lot of fun and new activities at night, and we get to know each other better. The time flew, and as result, the project was validated and approved. Furthermore, the pilot project was selected to go nationwide, and we had the opportunity to teach it to a lot of colleagues, in different states and different pharmacies. In my opinion, the program not only was funny, but also interesting and challenging. We were so eager to excel that we decided to write an article in the prestigious magazine Pharmacy Times. For this reason, I personally believe that is better to be busy at work than bored.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that is better to have an absorbing and demanding job. This is because challenging jobs demand professionals more prepare and because those types of job can be more fun than a regular job.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, i feel, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2644.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 564.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68794326241 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87326216964 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8711493897 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485815602837 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 854.1 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6405894027 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1333333333 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03333333333 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205555415413 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517559411209 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061251009649 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160430694529 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816429338273 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 86.8835125448 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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